THE OGRE
On a sunny day, there was a girl she has brown hair and dark blue eyes. Her name is Lily. One day Lily and her parents went camping. When they got there Lily saw how beautiful the frost was.
Dad said "Lily lets go fishing" "what's that"Lily said "you will find out"Dad said. So they start to walk throw the woods to the lake Lily saw a black figure in the distance Lily was scared so she said "Dad look" when Dad turned around it vanish "theirs nothing" Dad said when he turned around it was back the thing.
When they where walking Lily was lost "Dad Dad" Lily said in a strong voice.The strange thing was still there it was slow lie waking up to Lily. "hi" said the strange voice " hi who are you" Lily said "I am a ogre" said the voice. Lily was a little scared. The ogre said "are you okay" Lily replied with "no".
The ogre was sad for the little girl so he said "do you want to live with me in my hut" Lily think for a long time then she said "okay" so the ogre made Lily her own hut.So Lily had life in the woods.
The end
Thanks for sharing your writing Georgia. Good use of speech marks in your writing. I can't believe Lily went to live in the woods with the ogre!
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