THE OGRE

                               THE  OGRE

 

On a sunny day, there was a girl she has brown hair and dark blue eyes. Her name is Lily. One day Lily and her parents went camping. When they got there Lily saw how beautiful the frost was.

Dad said "Lily lets go fishing" "what's that"Lily said "you will find out"Dad said. So they start to walk throw the woods to the lake Lily saw a black figure in the distance Lily was scared so she said "Dad look" when Dad turned around it vanish "theirs nothing" Dad said when he turned around it was back the thing.

When they where walking Lily was lost "Dad Dad" Lily said in a strong voice.The strange thing was still there it was slow lie  waking up to Lily. "hi" said the strange voice " hi who are you" Lily said "I am a ogre" said the voice. Lily was a little scared. The ogre said "are you okay" Lily replied with "no".

The ogre was sad for the little girl so he said "do you want to live with me in my hut" Lily think for a long time then she said "okay" so the ogre made Lily her own hut.So Lily had life in the woods. 

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sort out the comments

 Today with Donna we have sort out the good comments and the bad comments. 

 

 A good blog.   

I think a good blog should include these things; 

- a title I think that a title is important because it tells the person what they're reading.

-editing you need to check your work because it is important if you don't it may not make sense  

-your blog should be written in first person because it is a personal piece of writing from the writer's point of view. 

-it needs to be friendly because if it isn't you could make people upset.

- the most important part of a blog is to not share any personal information like your last name or address. 

   Speech

My topic was should we us paper or devices it was hard but I like it. I chose this topic because I relate to the topic how I relate to the topic is because I love devices but I don't paper to work on.

I felt nervous when I went up but It was good to get it offer and done with.

It was hard to get a lot of information.It was hard to find thing that was interesting.My presentation was good but I dint get a good time.I got ten second under the time.

sailing

Sailing

Two centuries ago we went sailing.me and my Dad went in my Dad's car with Zoe Jazzlyn and Ava. We got seat belts on and went to the sailing at windy Taipa.We got there and sat on the tarpaulin. We got into groups and went to the beach first. We saw a school of fish. I thought it was so cool and then I made a sand castle.

 I was so excited for sailing because it was the next thing we were doing. Me and Ava walk to the sailing and Afril was talking about how to use the sailing boat me and Ava got a bright yellow sailing boat me and Ava where really bad at it at first then we got beater.Me and Ava nearly got tip offer.There where 2 boat that where thoring  placid ball out of the boat we were grabbing the placid ball but me and Ava didn't get any rub ducks. Then Afril was teaching us how to get flip offer and get back on the sailing boat.Then we went back to shore.

The last thing we were doing was eating lunch and doing games I ate my lunch and went to play when the other groups got back me and my Dad me and my Dad had to drop Zoe and Gene to school. We had a good time in the car and then me and my Dad went home.